The graph and table below give information about the percentage of graduates in Australia who worked full-time after university from 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about the percentage of graduates in Australia who worked full-time after university from 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph represents data about the number of
graduates
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in Australia who worked full-time after university between 2004 and 2012.
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, the table gives information about the Average wages of
graduates
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.
Overall
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,in the line graph, All
graduates
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declined a bit smaller,
while
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Mathematics
graduates
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experienced
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decrease over the time period.
In contrast
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, in the table,
while
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the Math
graduates
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were the largest figure in all years, Other graduate's indexes were much smaller compared to the math
graduates
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.
To begin
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with the graph,the percentage of All
graduates
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full-time workers started at exactly 80 per cent in 2004.
Then
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,
this
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figure experienced a small increase of just over 80% between 2006 and 2008. Afterwards, the percentage of All
graduates
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declined slowly to approximately 76% from 2008 to 2012.Regarding the Mathematics
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,
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figure started with a smaller percentage of grad at naughty 65% in 2004.
Then
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, the trend experienced a significant rise at about 88 per cent in 2006.
However
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,
this
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index decreased slowly in 2008 to approximately 84%. Afterwards, it experienced only a decline from 2008 to 2012 to 64 per cent. As for the table,the average wages of
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and other
graduates
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were the same 41,000 and 43,500 dollars in 2004 and 2006.
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, the
maths
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graduates
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were the largest proportion in 2008 with 51,500 wages.They differed by 3,500 dollars from Other
graduates
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.
Then
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, Other
graduates
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became the highest-paid
graduates
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in 2010 with 52,000 dollars.
Maths
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graduates
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were paid 48,500$ in that year.
Whereas
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,in 2012 the salary of
maths
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graduates
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was the smallest indicator with 59,000. The other
graduates
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were after that with 53,000$.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, in contrast, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, maths with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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