In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days in Britain, when somebody has old people, they often take the old people to a

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home

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with other old people that sometimes usually they will be paid by

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government

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the government

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to

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care

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home

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. In my opinion, I think the

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role

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of

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the family

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is very important in caring for elderly

parents

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, but the main responsibility should become

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government’s

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responsibility. There are some reasons that

support

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opinions

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such

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as,

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senior citizens are part of citizens who

give

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make

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the main contribution during their life

like

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whether through work, pay the tax and other social

contribution

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contributions

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. As a form of

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appreciation

for their services, the

government

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should provide facilities and financial

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to them.

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is part of the

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government

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social responsibility toward the residents.

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for

them

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who have elderly who

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difficult

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to paid

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paying for

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nursing

home

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. So, with the

government

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’s assistance, their families do not worry about paying

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senior citizens’s life in the

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home

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.

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, the family

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has a crucial role in giving the

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of emotional and moral towards their

parents

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.

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the

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just gives payment to their

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home

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, the

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of family is very vital for them.

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, when

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elderly

parents

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feel not noticed by their children, they will be stressed and depressed.

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, the roles of both the family and

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are equally important to

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elderly

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in nursing homes. In conclusion, the

government

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should take

actions

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in

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helping

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provide

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the

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apply

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financial

support

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by

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senior citizens at the

care

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home

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.

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that, the role of families

are

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so important

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to them because they will be very happy if be advised by you. A combination of both the family and

government

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can create an environment

that is

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comfortable

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the elderly

parents

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.