The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps illustrate a residential area in the
town
of Norbiton and possible future development of the region.
Overall
, it is predicted that the area will witness dramatic changes and will be modernised. Looking at the details, the bridge, which was constructed, connects now two sides of the river.
Also
, the road is planned to be extended and new houses are going to be built and expanded.
Moreover
, the school
planning
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to be constructed will be located to the east of the
town
. Meanwhile, the new playground which will be built to the north-east of the
town
will be near the river.
In addition
, it can be seen the
circle
at the bottom will be developed
,
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since the number of roads connected to it will be doubled. Both the shops and the medical centre are planned to be built around the
circle
.
However
, shops will be constructed to the southwest of the
circle
where the medical centre will be located to the southeast of the
circle
.
Furthermore
, there will be a smaller
circle
to the south side of the
town
, and the road which connects the two circles will be located between the shops and the medical centre.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, circle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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