The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ]
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Both diagrams demonstrate the data of pupils exchanged from Australia to Europe and the other way round.
Overall
, it is seen that the total results among the five countries are completely different at the end
of the period given. The average amount of students
went
to Australia Correct pronoun usage
who went
showing
an upward trend, Wrong verb form
showed
whereas
the count moved to Europe remained steadily
over the 2 years.
Change the word
steady
First,
as for the students
shifted
to Australia, only Sweden and Germany have increased in extent, having 42 and 63 pupils respectively after the initial rise. Correct pronoun usage
who shifted
In contrast
, other countries' statistics remained steadily
or plunged Change the word
steady
such
as United
Kingdom, Correct article usage
the United
which
number dropped from 31 to 25 in 2 years. Correct pronoun usage
whose
As a result
, the total has rocketed from 186 to 226 students
from 2007 to 2009.
Lastly
, The Netherlands is the only country which statistics cut in half counting 18 students
in 2009, while
having 32 in 2007. Furthermore
, France is the single country that has surged in amount from 37 to 58 throughout the whole period.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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