The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided graph demonstrates the production of three different types of clothing: suits, dresses, and coats, measured in millions, in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, all three categories’ rates have slightly risen over
this
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period, with coats experiencing the largest increase of 20
million
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. To give more detailed information, the 'coat'
category
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showed steady growth from 1990 to 2010, resulting in a production rate of 30
million
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.
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, the 'suit'
category
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also
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witnessed a rise;
however
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, it was not as steady and fluctuated slightly in 1995 and 2005, where there were both increases and declines. As for the 'dress'
category
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, it
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had a rise of 5
million
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. Its growth was generally stable, except in 1995
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when it dropped to its original value but
then
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continued to increase. By the end of 2010, the 'coat'
category
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had the highest production rate at 25
million
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units, followed by 'suits' at 17
million
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, and 'dresses' at 10
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, category with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production volume
  • Garment factory
  • Trend (increasing, decreasing)
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Market demand
  • Technological advancements
  • Production capacity
  • Raw material availability
  • Economic conditions
  • Notable observations
  • Significant shifts
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