The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The provided graph demonstrates the production of three different types of clothing: suits, dresses, and coats, measured in millions, in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.

Overall

, all three categories’ rates have slightly risen over

this

period, with coats experiencing the largest increase of 20

million

. To give more detailed information, the 'coat'

category

showed steady growth from 1990 to 2010, resulting in a production rate of 30

million

Moreover

, the 'suit'

category

also

witnessed a rise;

however

, it was not as steady and fluctuated slightly in 1995 and 2005, where there were both increases and declines. As for the 'dress'

category

, it

also

had a rise of 5

million

. Its growth was generally stable, except in 1995

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when it dropped to its original value but

then

continued to increase. By the end of 2010, the 'coat'

category

had the highest production rate at 25

million

units, followed by 'suits' at 17

million

, and 'dresses' at 10

million

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Production volume
Garment factory
Trend (increasing, decreasing)
Comparative analysis
Fluctuations
Market demand
Technological advancements
Production capacity
Raw material availability
Economic conditions
Notable observations
Significant shifts

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