The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph gives information about the variations
of
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in
thee
types of Correct your spelling
the
cloths
produced in the same factory for two decades starting from 1990.
In the early 90s, Correct your spelling
clothes
suit
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the suit
a suit
is
the most Wrong verb form
was
favorite
garment, having a demand of 15 Change the spelling
favourite
million
in the first year, it grew for a half-decade and reached a peak of 21 million
. However
, with a moderate negative gradient, it fell to nearly the same number as 1990. Thereafter
, with a mild increase, it ended at over 20 million
. Although
,
the production of the coat was the Remove the comma
apply
least
one, well over 5 Correct your spelling
last
million
, in
the commencement of the period, its curve soared abruptly, outperforming the dress trend in 1995 and the suit one in 2000, at the number of 12 Change preposition
at
million
and 19 respectively, it kept its growth by the last
year. compared to its initial quantity, it approximatly
tripled when it finished its trend.
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approximately
Whereas
, dress experinced
the lowest Correct your spelling
experienced
experience
flactuations amoung
gorments, beginning with ten Correct your spelling
fluctuations among
million
, it oscillated between 10 and 15 million
before 2000; then
with a 50 percent increase, it touch
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touched
million
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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