The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph gives information about the variations
of
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thee
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the
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types of
cloths
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clothes
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produced in the same factory for two decades starting from 1990. In the early 90s,
suit
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the suit
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is
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the most
favorite
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garment, having a demand of 15
million
in the first year, it grew for a half-decade and reached a peak of 21
million
.
However
, with a moderate negative gradient, it fell to nearly the same number as 1990.
Thereafter
, with a mild increase, it ended at over 20
million
.
Although
,
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the production of the coat was the
least
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one, well over 5
million
,
in
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the commencement of the period, its curve soared abruptly, outperforming the dress trend in 1995 and the suit one in 2000, at the number of 12
million
and 19 respectively, it kept its growth by the
last
year. compared to its initial quantity, it
approximatly
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approximately
tripled when it finished its trend.
Whereas
, dress
experinced
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experienced
experience
the lowest
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fluctuations among
gorments, beginning with ten
million
, it oscillated between 10 and 15
million
before 2000;
then
with a 50 percent increase, it
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15
million
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production volume
  • Garment factory
  • Trend (increasing, decreasing)
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Market demand
  • Technological advancements
  • Production capacity
  • Raw material availability
  • Economic conditions
  • Notable observations
  • Significant shifts
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