The bar chart provides information about the level of female unemployment in four parts of the United Kingdom between the years of 2013 to 2014

The bar chart provides information about the level of female unemployment in four parts of the United Kingdom between the years of 2013 to 2014
The chart provides information about the percentages of female unemployment in four different parts of the United Kingdom during the years 2013 to 2014.
Overall
, the rates in three different parts of the United Kingdom,
such
as England, Wales, and Northern Ireland were significantly higher in the
year
2013 than in the
year
2014.
Whereas
in Scotland, the number was higher in the
year
2014 than in the
year
2013. It was the opposite of three other countries.
Firstly
, the highest level of not working females in the
year
2013 was in England, and the level was not much different when compared to 2014, they were between 6,8 % to 6,5 %. The comparison of both was nearly the same and the highest among other countries.
Secondly
, Wales and Northern Ireland
also
had a fluctuating ratio between 2013 to 2014. They had almost the same percentage in 2013,
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was above 5%, but Northern Ireland experienced a significant decrease to 10% from 2013 to 2014.
On the other hand
, Scotland had the most amount of females without a job reaching 6,7% as the maximum percentage in 2014, but it had the second highest level after England in 2013. In conclusion, by analyzing the chart, many differences can be seen between the numbers of females without a job, and only a slight change in the percentage can be observed.
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  • unemployment rate
  • temporal trends
  • regional variations
  • economic policies
  • industry growth/decline
  • educational opportunities
  • social implications
  • gender equality
  • workforce participation
  • family income
  • employment opportunities
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