Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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There is no denying the fact that employees must be paid based on their qualifications.
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it is a commonly held belief that there is a huge difference between the
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job and the highest, there is
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an argument that
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to reduce
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difference.
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topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
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Ensure that the main points of the essay are fully developed and supported with clear examples or explanations. This will help strengthen your argument and make your position clearer.
coherence cohesion
Try to maintain coherence in your essay by smoothly connecting ideas and paragraphs. This will make the argument more compelling and easier to follow.
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The introduction is clear and sets up the discussion for the essay, showing understanding of the topic and the intention to explore both perspectives.
coherence cohesion
The essay is structured logically with a clear introduction, indicating that there will be a balanced discussion and possibly a conclusion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wage gap
  • economic disparity
  • poverty reduction
  • motivation
  • social stability
  • company loyalty
  • pay structures
  • quality of life
  • equitable access
  • fairness
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