The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps give information about the
village
of Bunborough nowadays
as well as
future plans for 2024.
Overall
, infrastructures will see the most important changes. Another house and
two
hotels will be constructed and
two
houses will be relocated. Shops will remain exactly the same. Regarding
infrastructures
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infrastructure
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, a new
road
will be built in the south to connect the
village
and the main
road
that goes from Lynwich to
Maychester
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Manchester
.
In addition
, a
railway
will pass through the
village
from the south to the north-east and a new train station will be built as well.
Finally
,
two
of the actual fishing ports will be replaced by a promenade. Looking at houses and hotels, a new house will be built in the north-east, at the corner formed by the new
railway
and the
road
,
while
due to
the construction of the
railway
,
two
houses will be moved from under to above the
road
that actually connects the
village
and the main
road
.
Two
hotels will open, the first will be located between the beach and the
railway
,
while
the other will be just above the promenade.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, village, road, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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