The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The illustration provided displays the
life
cycle transition of the Monarch butterfly throughout their lives. At first glance, it can be observed that Monarch butterflies stem from
eggs
provided by adult species. The transition from
eggs
to the final shape the butterfly is bound to acquire throughout the first
stage
is substantially short when
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compared to its
life
duration. There are primarily 4 stages during their
life
. The first
stage
is known as the egg
stage
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when they undergo a transformation from
eggs
laying on milkweed to a newly hatched larva, which takes approximately 14 days. After that, the larval
stage
happens. The larva remains in the milkweed and,
finally
, it attaches itself to the caterpillar, forming a chrysalis, for about 10 days.
Subsequently
, the adult butterfly emerges from the chrysalis during the pupal
stage
and commences its migration,
firstly
to the south and, after 6 months, to the north. By
this
time the butterflies produce their
eggs
by mating and their
life
cycle starts all over again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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