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The chart depicts the percentage of residents’ survey
result
in five Australian towns about their preferences between buying and drinking tea or Change the verb form
results
coffee
for their last
4 weeks. Overall
, going to a café for both drinks dominated in all cities except Adelaide. Besides
that, buying fresh coffee
remained the smallest number over
all areas.
In the Change preposition
in
last
month in four cities, café visitors comprised the majority of the survey data, reaching over 60% in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, while
nearly 55% were in Brisbane. Bought instant coffee
generally became second
option, ranging between 45% in Sydney to just under 55% in Hobart.
Change the article
the second
On the other hand
, there was a relatively small gap in the Adelaide population between buying instant coffee
and enjoying caffeine drinks in a shop, with almost equal proportions, but instant coffee
slightly higher. Interestingly, fresh coffee
buyers in Brisbane and Adelaide had a far lower rate compared to those who bought ready-to-drink coffee
and went to a tea house or an espresso bar, with both sharing similar
rate of about a third. In the remaining three places, ground Correct article usage
a similar
coffee
admirers also
represented the least, showing no more than 45%.Submitted by nineband9s on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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