The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The flowchart

illustartes

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illustrates

the process in which

glass

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repurpused

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repurposed

. It can be clearly seen that the process goes through six steps starting with collecting

glass

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in recycling trash cans and ending with delivering the new products to supermarkets.

First,

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used

glass

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is placed in specific collection bins which can be found in

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different

neighbourhoods and streets throughout

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the

city. Designated trash pickup

lorrys

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lorries

lorry

collects

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the

glass

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from trash cans before delivering it to a treatment plant where

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glass

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the glass

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goes through a washing and

sterlising

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sterilising

machine in order to kill harmful bacteria and

toxcines

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toxins

. Afterwards, clean

glass

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is crushed and melted by a specific machine before being placed in another one that has different moulds where the melted

glass

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is poured

in to

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into

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take

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apply

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a new shape.

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, the new

glass

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is delivered by trucks to local supermarkets and shops for

distrubation

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distribution

.The process can be repeated again and there is no limit

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how many times it can be done as long as people are

welling

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willing

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separte

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separate

glass

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for recycling.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
recycled
stages
collection
waste glass
sources
bottles
jars
windows
transported
recycling facility
sorted
color
processes
cleaned
impurities
labels
caps
crushed
cullet
raw material
melted
furnace
temperature
molded
new glass products
distribution
consumers

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