The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flowchart illustrates the process by which
glass
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is repurposed. It can be clearly seen that the process goes through six steps starting with collecting
glass
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in recycling trash cans and ending with delivering the new products to supermarkets.
First,
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used
glass
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is placed in specific collection bins which can be found in different neighbourhoods and streets throughout the city. Designated pickup lorries collect the
glass
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from trash cans before delivering it to a treatment plant where the
glass
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goes through a washing and sterilising machine in order to kill harmful bacteria and toxins. Afterwards, clean
glass
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is crushed and melted by a specific machine before being placed in another one that has different moulds where the melted
glass
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is poured into a new shape.
Finally
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, the new
glass
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is delivered by trucks to local supermarkets and shops for distribution. The process can be repeated again and there is no limit to how many times it can be done as long as people are willing to separate
glass
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for recycling.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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