The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates a man-made process of how
glass
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is recycled.
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, the trash is collected from houses or workplaces and
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undergoes several
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processes
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thanks to which it can be made viable to use again.
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, the
glass
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bottle is put into a recycle bin after being used
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Then
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it is brought by a transportation truck to a treatment plant, where it is going to be repurposed Once the
glass
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waste is transported to the treatment facility, it is washed and sterilized in order to remove dirt from the material and kill any potential bacteria.
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, the material is crushed by a press and put into a melting machine, where it becomes liquid.
The next step is
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pouring the liquid
glass
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into a moulding machine
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so that it can be moulded into a bottle or another desired shape. When the
glass
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hardens, it can be delivered to a supermarket by the supplier and used again. The cycle repeats when the
glass
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waste is put into the recycle bin again.
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