The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a man-made process of how
glass
is recycled.
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Overall
, the trash is collected from houses or workplaces and Linking Words
then
undergoes several Linking Words
proceses
thanks to which it can be made viable to use again.
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processes
process
Initially
, the Linking Words
glass
bottle is put into a recycle bin after being usedUse synonyms
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Then
it is brought by a transportation truck to a treatment plant, where it is going to be repurposed
Once the Linking Words
glass
waste is transported to the treatment facility, it is washed and sterilized in order to remove dirt from the material and kill any potential bacteria. Use synonyms
Then
, the material is crushed by a press and put into a melting machine, where it becomes liquid. Linking Words
The next step is
pouring the liquid Linking Words
glass
into a moulding machineUse synonyms
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so that it can be moulded into a bottle or another desired shape. When the Remove the comma
apply
glass
hardens, it can be delivered to a supermarket by the supplier and used again. The cycle repeats when the Use synonyms
glass
waste is put into the recycle bin again.Use synonyms
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