The diagram below illustrate how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.
The given diagram shows the process of producing clean drinking
water
with a Use synonyms
water
filter.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that there are numerous steps in the process from the initial impure Linking Words
water
to the final portable Use synonyms
water
.
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To begin
with, let us shed light on the first step, impure Linking Words
water
is put into a metal container with a wooden lid. In the metal Use synonyms
container
there are three filtering layers, namely sand, charcoal and gravel, with sand at the top and gravel at the Add a comma
container,
bottom
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, in the Linking Words
bottom
Use synonyms
part
, the Use synonyms
water
, which is filtered through the three layers, is stored temporarily. Use synonyms
Further
, an angled metal pipe is there which has the lower opening in the Linking Words
bottom
Use synonyms
part
of the Use synonyms
water
filter Use synonyms
tank
. The upper Use synonyms
part
of the pipe comes out from the upper Use synonyms
part
and is linked to another closed metal Use synonyms
tank
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the filtered Linking Words
water
from the first Use synonyms
tank
is brought into the second Use synonyms
tank
, which is at a lower level than the first Use synonyms
tank
. There is a tap attached to the Use synonyms
bottom
area of the Use synonyms
tank
, through which the clean drinking Use synonyms
water
can be taken out for drinking.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, bottom, part, tank with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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