The diagram below illustrate how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.

The diagram below illustrate how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.
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The given diagram shows the process of producing clean drinking
water
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with a
water
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filter.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there are numerous steps in the process from the initial impure
water
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to the final portable
water
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.
To begin
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with, let us shed light on the first step, impure
water
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is put into a metal container with a wooden lid. In the metal
container
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container,
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there are three filtering layers, namely sand, charcoal and gravel, with sand at the top and gravel at the
bottom
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.
Additionally
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, in the
bottom
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part
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, the
water
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, which is filtered through the three layers, is stored temporarily.
Further
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, an angled metal pipe is there which has the lower opening in the
bottom
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part
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of the
water
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filter
tank
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. The upper
part
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of the pipe comes out from the upper
part
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and is linked to another closed metal
tank
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.
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, the filtered
water
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from the first
tank
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is brought into the second
tank
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, which is at a lower level than the first
tank
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. There is a tap attached to the
bottom
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area of the
tank
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, through which the clean drinking
water
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can be taken out for drinking.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, bottom, part, tank with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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