Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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firstly
,I strongly support that
children
should organize their own free
time
,which can truly help them develop independence.
However
,sometimes parents
also
need to provide some assistance I think
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children
should have their own organization and arrangement to choose to engage in extracurricular activities during their free
time
.Because
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children
themselves are better able to understand
their
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interests and skills they want to cultivate,they can truly arrange their
time
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happily
according to
their own needs.
In addition
,by allowing
children
to
plan
their own free
time
,their skills in independently arranging learning
ang
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and
tasks can be improved,allowing them to
plan
their vacations and lives reasonably.Everyone should learn to
plan
their
time
and complete the tasks they need,balancing learning with hobbies and entertainment.
This
is something that every child must
learnas
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learn as
learn
they grow up. But
on the other hand
,I believe that fully autonomous planning of personal free
time
should be suitable for
children
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10 years old who are relatively
self disciplined
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in their daily lives.Because younger
children
have not yet formed a system and consciousness for
time
planning and control,their brains have not fully
developedthis
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developed this
developed his
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ability
.
However
,some
children
who
lack
self-discipline or have ADHD or other
charactreistics
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characteristics
that lead to
lack
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a lack
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of concentration need to
plan
their
time
with external assistance in order to arrange their schedule. Especially for
children
who
lack
self-control,their
time
is likely to
be wastes
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in vain. In childhood,
havingparents
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having parents
as
time
planners can help them understand how to use their spare
time
more effectively and improve efficiency.
Finally
,I believe that the main
bodyin plannig
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body planning
their free
time
should be the
children
thenselves
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themselves
,but when they
lack
a sense of
time
or planning awareness,having parents assist in
lanning
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planning
their free
time
is
also
beneficial for
time
utilization.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • balanced development
  • expose children to
  • tailored activities
  • promote discipline
  • foster independence
  • genuine interests
  • free play
  • problem-solving skills
  • emotional well-being
  • unstructured time
  • personal exploration
  • structured activities
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