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The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant. (Table)

The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant. (Table)
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The given diagram illustrates the figure for educational institutions in the top 200 in the world in three different subjects including biology, medicine and psychology in five countries. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that the number of institutions ranked top 200 in three categories mentioned in the USA and the United Kingdom witness a high level
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 a reserve pattern could be observed in the figure of colleges in Australia, New Zealand and Canada.
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 the biology category, The USA’s academy takes the lead with 69
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, followed by the figure for the United Kingdom’s educational
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, at 30.
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, the university numbers at the top in Australia, New Zealand and Canada are much lower compared to the data of the two nations remaining; about 9,6 and 9, respectively. In terms of medication and therapy subjects, the USA’s colleges still stay at the highest level with 54 and 58
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, in the given order, meanwhile, those in the United Kingdom are 24 and 29, respectively.
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, the number of
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 in New Zealand in
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 chart
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 the lowest point, only 2 and 4
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 in turn of antibiotic and mental processes subjects. Australia and Canada witness 13 and 12
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 in the medical field and 12 and 14
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 in psychology, correspondingly.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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