The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the given graph represents the data
over
the number of members for a variety of activities like Change preposition
on
film
club
, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances at Melbourne's social centre
in Australia from 2000 until 2020 year
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Social Centre
overall
, the film
club
was the most popular facility all
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at all
the
time, Correct article usage
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while
amateur dramatics and musical performances had the smallest amount of participants
in
the end of the graphic, the graph shows that table tennis had the highest growth over Change the preposition
at
the
time, and the Correct article usage
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film
club
had the smallest increase
The film
club
had the highest number of members in 2000 years,about 64 people, and had slightly decreased to 60 people the next decade, and
in 2010 started to slowly grow to the amount he had at the beginning. Martial arts had approximately 35 students Correct word choice
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in
the start and fluctuated with minor Change preposition
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,and had about 38 students in 2020.
The amateur Fix the agreement mistake
changes
club
had 26 participants
in 2020,
and stayed stable for the next five years, though had Remove the comma
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the
dramatic decrease until 2020 to 5 members. Correct article usage
a
The table
tennis had 16 Correct article usage
Table
participants
in 2000 and remained stable until 2010 and rapidly went up to 55 partners in 2020. The last
activity musical performances started only in 2005 and moderately grew to 15 participants
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