The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows
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the
numberof
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number of
participants
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for
entertements
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entertainment
activities
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in Melbourne,Australia
between
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, between
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2000 and 2020.
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, the different
activities
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at one social centre in Melbourne
different
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trends
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over
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the
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time
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.People more interested went to
film
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the film
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club over
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time. As the graph shows,Melbourne people
more
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are more
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interested
film
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in film
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club&nbsp
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clubs
;
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,
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started
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which started
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at
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around 65
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number of
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participents
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participants
in 2000,but
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figure
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was
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increased
around
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70 in 2020.
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activities
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activity
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table
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, table
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tennis
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tennis,
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started
at
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15
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number of
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participants
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in 2000
and
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this
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figure
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small
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increased
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20
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number of
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partipants
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participants
in 2010, and in
2010
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2010,
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this
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figure
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was
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significant
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increased
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55
in
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participants in
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2020.The
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propotion
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proportion
for&nbsp
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for
;
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musical
performances
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performance
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activities
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was 0
number
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of
participants
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in 2005, but
this
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propotion
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proportion
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increased
around
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19
number
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of
participants
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in 2020. 
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other
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activities
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amatuer
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amateur
dramatics started
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with
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25
participants
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in 2000
but
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, but
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this
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propotion
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proportion
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small
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small,
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inreased
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increased
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30, but
this
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figure
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was
significant
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significantly
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decreased   5
participants
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in 2020. The martial arts
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was
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were
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in the first position around 38
participants
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in 2000, but
this
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figure
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was small decreased in 2005, and
this
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propotion
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proportion
was
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slightly
;
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increased in
2005
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2005,
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andthis
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and this
figure
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was decreased in 2020.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words participants, activities, number, figure, propotion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable numbers
  • fluctuations
  • overall participation
  • comparison
  • activities
  • social centre
  • Melbourne
  • participants
  • highlight
  • report
  • graph illustrates/demonstrates
  • 20-year period
  • key features
  • main features
  • statistical data
  • variations
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