The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Sure! Here's the corrected version of your text: I totally agree with

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opinion,

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I am 100% against physical punishment. I believe that

children

could be taught by their parents and taught with the

right

education. Appropriate and sufficient

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must be given to

children

to help them make the

right

decisions. Some families punish their

children

by not feeding them and sometimes even through physical punishment. Psychologists say that not only do these things fail to teach

children

, but they

also

make them repeat the wrong

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. It is important not to yell loudly at kids whenever they make a mistake.

In addition

, try to describe the bad consequences that will result if they do not do the

right

thing. Encouraging them when they do the

right

thing is very significant and makes them enthusiastic.

Overall

, education at an early age is so crucial that

children

can be taught the

right

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, not actions that harm them mentally and physically.