The diagrams below show the stage and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stage and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams depict the various stages of semen and concrete production with details of the required equipment.
Overall
, both materials demand mixing machines to make an appropriate outcome, but the
cement
requires materials to be crushed, heated and
grinded
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ground
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. Regarding
cement
, the first level is Limestone and clay, both being crushed into
powder
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a powder
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which
then
are
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is
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directed into a mixer, after
appropriate
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the appropriate
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measure
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of
mixture
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the mixture
a mixture
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,
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the poweder
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poweder
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powder
then
is heated inside a rotating heater.
Following
this
, the final product is made after being
grinded
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ground
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and packaged into bags of
cement
.
On the other hand
, concrete is not solely made of
cement
, interestingly it consists of 15%
cement
, 10% water, 50% small stones, and 25% sand, where all of them are put together in a concrete mixer and
then
mixed for an appropriate duration in order to produce
a concrete
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concrete
a block of concrete
a hunk of concrete
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crusher
  • mixer
  • rotating heater
  • grinder
  • fine powder
  • limestone
  • clay
  • cement
  • concrete
  • ratios
  • building purposes
  • small stones
  • high temperatures
  • uniform blend
  • equipment
  • process
  • stages
  • material
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