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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate an
island
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 after and before the refurbishment of tourist amenities.
Overall
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, it is evident the considerable modification undergone on the
island
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.
Furthermore
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, a new restaurant, vehicle tracks, footpath,
accommodations
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, and a pier have been constructed,
whereas
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 the trees and a beach remained unchanged. Looking in more detail, a restaurant has been built on the south side of the
island
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, and
this
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 connected the reception through the novelty vehicle way.
In addition
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, the reception was erected in the middle of the area, which was surrounded by the car track.
This
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 vehicle track connected the west side of the
accommodations
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. There were new
accommodations
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 which were constructed not only in the western part but east side of the
island
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. Regarding other changes, there were newly laid footpaths that joined the
accommodations
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.
Moreover
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, one of them attached the beach to the residence area in the west.
Additionally
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, the pier was constructed in the northern of the
island
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.
In contrast
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,
while
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 the
island
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 changed considerably, the trees remained irreplaceable throughout the period.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, accommodations with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • before and after
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • natural features
  • network of cottages
  • footpaths
  • recreational areas
  • pristine environment
  • organized lodging facilities
  • strategically positioned
  • delineated pathways
  • untouched nature
  • accessibility
  • isolated island experience
  • enhanced transportation options
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