The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate an
island
after and before the refurbishment of tourist amenities.
Overall
, it is evident the considerable modification undergone on the island
. Furthermore
, a new restaurant, vehicle tracks, footpath, accommodations
, and a pier have been constructed, whereas
the trees and a beach remained unchanged.
Looking in more detail, a restaurant has been built on the south side of the island
, and this
connected the reception through the novelty vehicle way. In addition
, the reception was erected in the middle of the area, which was surrounded by the car track. This
vehicle track connected the west side of the accommodations
. There were new accommodations
which were constructed not only in the western part but east side of the island
.
Regarding other changes, there were newly laid footpaths that joined the accommodations
. Moreover
, one of them attached the beach to the residence area in the west. Additionally
, the pier was constructed in the northern of the island
. In contrast
, while
the island
changed considerably, the trees remained irreplaceable throughout the period.Submitted by ilkin.abdullaev04 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, accommodations with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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