The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate an
island
after and before the refurbishment of tourist amenities.
Overall
, it is evident the considerable modification undergone on the
island
.
Furthermore
, a new restaurant, vehicle tracks, footpath,
accommodations
, and a pier have been constructed,
whereas
the trees and a beach remained unchanged. Looking in more detail, a restaurant has been built on the south side of the
island
, and
this
connected the reception through the novelty vehicle way.
In addition
, the reception was erected in the middle of the area, which was surrounded by the car track.
This
vehicle track connected the west side of the
accommodations
. There were new
accommodations
which were constructed not only in the western part but east side of the
island
. Regarding other changes, there were newly laid footpaths that joined the
accommodations
.
Moreover
, one of them attached the beach to the residence area in the west.
Additionally
, the pier was constructed in the northern of the
island
.
In contrast
,
while
the
island
changed considerably, the trees remained irreplaceable throughout the period.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, accommodations with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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