The diagrams below show the stage and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stage and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs below illustrate the stages of manufacturing
cement
, all
together with
the various machinery required in each stage, and the specific materials with their percentage needed in order to
cerate
Correct your spelling
create
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concrete.
Overall
, the key points to mention are that
cement
production is complex and consists of several stages, and that concrete is made from four fundamental elements in precise proportion. Regarding
cement
, the procedure is initiated with raw materials
such
as Limestone and clay being crushed into powder through a crusher,
then
the powder is put into a mixer and passed through a rotating heater where heat is supplied constantly.
In addition
, the material still requires one final process, which is to ground it, package it into prepared bags, and
then
deliver it to the market. After the ingredients are transferred to the concrete-making site, a combination of 15%
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% small stones are combined together in a mixer and blended so that concrete is
finally
made out.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • crusher
  • mixer
  • rotating heater
  • grinder
  • fine powder
  • limestone
  • clay
  • cement
  • concrete
  • ratios
  • building purposes
  • small stones
  • high temperatures
  • uniform blend
  • equipment
  • process
  • stages
  • material
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