The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The tables compare the selling of Fairtrade products: coffee and bananas in 5 European countries in 1999 and 2004. Despite there being fluctuations in price,

overall

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it is clear that

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of coffee sharply increased in the United Kingdom in 5 years.

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, the amount of money on the banana jumped 5 times of Swiss and Dane people. At the outset,

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Switzerland was at the top with

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of coffee with €3

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in 1999,

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number doubled in 2004 and fell to the second stage. If in 1999 1.5

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euros were spent by English people to drink the black substance, after half a decade they were dominant with 20 mln of € .

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, 1.8 mln of € was in Denmark and Sweden people bought

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drink for €0.8 lot,though their growth was just €0.2

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, 2 and 1 sum respectively.

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Belgium's

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went up to €0.7

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and showed 1.7 in 2004.

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, The UK was a leader in

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of bananas in 1999 (€15 mln) and it tripled in 2004.

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, Swiss and Dane's payments were 1 and 0.6 lot euros and they grew 5 times.

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, Belgium and Sweden's spending halved in 2004, 1 and 0.9 sum of € respectively,

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