The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The tables compare the selling of Fairtrade products: coffee and bananas in 5 European countries in 1999 and 2004. Despite there being fluctuations in price,
overall
,
it is clear that
sales
of coffee sharply increased in the United Kingdom in 5 years.
Additionally
, the amount of money on the banana jumped 5 times of Swiss and Dane people. At the outset,
although
Switzerland was at the top with
sales
of coffee with €3
million
in 1999,
this
number doubled in 2004 and fell to the second stage. If in 1999 1.5
million
euros were spent by English people to drink the black substance, after half a decade they were dominant with 20 mln of € .
Moreover
, 1.8 mln of € was in Denmark and Sweden people bought
this
drink for €0.8 lot,though their growth was just €0.2
million
, 2 and 1 sum respectively.
While
,
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Belgium's
sales
went up to €0.7
million
and showed 1.7 in 2004.
However
, The UK was a leader in
sales
of bananas in 1999 (€15 mln) and it tripled in 2004.
Furthermore
, Swiss and Dane's payments were 1 and 0.6 lot euros and they grew 5 times.
Nonetheless
, Belgium and Sweden's spending halved in 2004, 1 and 0.9 sum of € respectively,
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