The charts below show the percentage of water used different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the share of
water
used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic purposes
in six parts of the world.
Generally, agriculture uses more water
than industry, with the exception of Europe
and North America
. In South America
, Africa, and Central Asia
, the second
most common use
of water
is for domestic purposes
. South East Asia
ranks industrial use
second
.
It is evident that the majority of water
usage is for agriculture, with the exception of Europe
and North America
. Furthermore
, South America
, Africa, Central Asia
, and Southeast Asia
utilize significantly more water
for agriculture than for other purposes
.
It is evident that industry consumes more water
in Europe
and North America
, accounting for 53 and 48 per cent of total usage, respectively. Moreover
, Southeast Asia
ranks industrial water
use
second
, at 12 per cent. However
, the second
most common use
of water
in Europe
and North America
is for agricultural purposes
.Submitted by mkhdermani on
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