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The charts below show the percentage of water used different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the share of
water
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 used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
purposes
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 in six parts of the world. Generally, agriculture uses more
water
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 than industry, with the exception of
Europe
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 and North
America
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. In South
America
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, Africa, and Central
Asia
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, the
second
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 most common
use
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 of
water
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 is for domestic
purposes
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. South East
Asia
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 ranks industrial
use
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second
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. It is evident that the majority of
water
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 usage is for agriculture, with the exception of
Europe
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 and North
America
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.
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, South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and Southeast
Asia
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 utilize significantly more
water
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 for agriculture than for other
purposes
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. It is evident that industry consumes more
water
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 in
Europe
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 and North
America
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, accounting for 53 and 48 per cent of total usage, respectively.
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, Southeast
Asia
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 ranks industrial
water
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use
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second
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, at 12 per cent.
However
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, the
second
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 most common
use
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 of
water
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 in
Europe
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 and North
America
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 is for agricultural
purposes
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, purposes, europe, america, asia, second, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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