The first chart below gives information about the money spend by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
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The line graphs illustrate the spending money on children’s sporting activities by parents in Britain
as well as
the number of children who took part in three types of sports in Britain from 2008 to 2014.
It is clearly observed that over the entire period, the amount of money spent on children’s sports increased gradually. Additionally
, football emerged as the most popular sport among pupils.
Between 2008 and 2010, the figure for children who participated in athletics remained constant at approximately 1 million
. Over the next 2 years, it rose dramatically to 5 million
. In the subsequent years, it saw a slight decline of 4 million
. Also
, In 2008, the number of participants in football was just over 7.5, whereas
that of swimming was lower at just under 2.5 million
. From this
year until 2014, these figures grew minimally by almost 9 and 3.5 million
respectively.
Furthermore
, in 2008, the amount of money on children’s sports was 20 pounds while
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