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The graph below provide infprmation on figures for urban populations in different world regions.

The graph below provide infprmation on figures for urban populations in different world regions.
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The bar chart provides statistics about the number of urban populations in developed and developing regions throughout the interval of 2015 to 2040. The units are measured in millions of people.
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, it is clear from the graph that the count of populations in developing countries was expected to grow significantly.
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, developed regions showed consistency in their population rate,
whereas
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 developed countries experienced a steady increase over that period.
According to
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 what is shown. Developed countries began at slightly more than 1000 in 2015 and remained stable throughout the period until 2040, ‘’as it was expected’’. In terms of developing regions, the figure of their populations was around 2000 in 2015, and
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 they grew in a
line- scale
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 pattern over the course of 25 years, from 2015 to 2040. It is projected to become approximately 4000 by 2040.

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