The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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encourages
people
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facilitate
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people
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people
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via
Internet
rather than face-to-face. Use synonyms
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instead
of booking a flight to see your family, you can see them via social media applications whenever you want.
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in
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therefore
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