In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In

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this

day, the

use

of

plastic

materials

in the industry has grown rapidly, especially in the meals industry.

This

has caused debates

whether

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the

use

of

plastic

containers

will give more advantages or disadvantages. Using

plastic

containers

will lead to environmental issues

as well as

some serious

health

issues.

However

,

plastic

containers

are very practical and safe to

use

for carrying food and they have a cheaper cost than other

materials

. Despite

this

, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. One of the potential benefits of using

plastic

containers

is that it will be more practical and safe for us to

carrying

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meals.

Plastic

containers

usually have a safe cover so it will reduce the risk of spills or damage when the meals are being carried.

Furthermore

, using

plastic

containers

can help companies to maintain the production costs because

plastic

materials

is

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way more cheap than other

materials

like metal, glass, or

alumunium

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aluminium

foils. Despite the advantages, the drawbacks when using

plastic

materials

can give more concerns

especially

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, especially

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for the

environment

. As we know

that

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plastic

materials

will

be

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difficult to decompose in the

environment

,

it

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will lead to

main

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issues for the

environment

causing

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by the waste of

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plastic

,

furthermore

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it

also

can be dangerous for the marine animal ecosystem.

Moreover

, the

use

of

plastic

for storing food can be dangerous for our bodies especially when the

plastic

is exposed

with

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the heat of the meal.

This

can cause some serious

health

problems

such

as cancer and other long-term

health

problems

effects. In conclusion,

while

the

beneficial

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of using

plastic

containers

can be more practical and safe for carrying food and

also

will give

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a

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cost-effectiveness

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for

the

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companies, the drawbacks of using

plastic

containers

will

give

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a lot of dangerous

problems

especially

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, especially

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for the

environment

and can

causing

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some serious

health

problems

.