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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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The line graph illustrates different sources of
air
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pollutants
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 in
term
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 of transport, industry, total
air
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 pollution, and households in
UK
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the UK
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 between 1990 and 2005. The figures are given in million tonnes.
Overall
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, it can be seen that all sources of
air
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pollutants
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were
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had
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 upward trends
excapt
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except
 transport. Looking first at the number of
air
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pollutants
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 over 2, the figure for total
air
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pollutions
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pollution
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 started at approximately 7 and
then
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pluged
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plugged
plunged
 to above 3 by 1990 to 2005. In 1990, there was a significant drop in industry from under 6 to 2 in 2005. Moving on to the
souces
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sources
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 of
air
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pollutants
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 under 2,
Air
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pollutants
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 which use for transport remained stable at around 1 from 1990 to 2005.
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, in 1990, there was a negligible period of fluctuation in households before reaching a trough of just above 0 over
the
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15 years.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emissions
  • Air quality
  • Pollutants
  • Contributing factors
  • Industrial processes
  • Transport sector
  • Household energy
  • Agricultural activities
  • Percentage change
  • Decade
  • Reduction
  • Increase
  • Significantly
  • Fluctuations
  • Trends
  • Sustainable practices
  • Environmental policy
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