You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided illustration depicts the activities that European adults preferred to do in their free
times
in 1985 and 1995.
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time
To begin
with, the most significant per cent of peopel
, nearly one-Correct your spelling
people
third,
used to watch TV in 1985; ten years later, they were not change
their hobby markedly; Change the verb form
did not change
simillarly
30 per cent liked to sit in front of Correct your spelling
similarly
TV
. Add an article
the TV
However
, in the latter year, a new activity, playing video games, was added to the list of their preferences, and soon it attracted its audiences which was the second notable proprotion
; 27%.
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proportion
Although
under one-fifth of the considered age group had tended to talk to their families in 1985, they became more extroverted ten years later; over one-forth
of the adults spent their leisure time Correct your spelling
one-fourth
for
speaking with friends, and only 7% were eager to talk with the members of their families. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, compared to the proportio
of adults who ate out in 1985, Correct your spelling
proportion
this
number reduced almost three times to reach 8% in 1995. Finally
, other activites
were less widespread in 1995, it decreased from 6 per cent in 1985 to 2%.
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activities
Overall
, there was a shift in the people's hobbies. in the first year, they preferred to watch TV andSubmitted by faraisam33 on
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