You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. 

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

 

Write at least 150 words.
The provided illustration depicts the activities that European adults preferred to do in their free
times
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in 1985 and 1995.
To begin
with, the most significant per cent of
peopel
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people
, nearly one-
third,
used to watch TV in 1985; ten years later, they
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their hobby markedly;
simillarly
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similarly
30 per cent liked to sit in front of
TV
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the TV
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.
However
, in the latter year, a new activity, playing video games, was added to the list of their preferences, and soon it attracted its audiences which was the second notable
proprotion
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proportion
; 27%.
Although
under one-fifth of the considered age group had tended to talk to their families in 1985, they became more extroverted ten years later; over
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of the adults spent their leisure time
for
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speaking with friends, and only 7% were eager to talk with the members of their families.
Moreover
, compared to the
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proportion
of adults who ate out in 1985,
this
number reduced almost three times to reach 8% in 1995.
Finally
, other
activites
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activities
were less widespread in 1995, it decreased from 6 per cent in 1985 to 2%.
Overall
, there was a shift in the people's hobbies. in the first year, they preferred to watch TV and
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