The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart displays the proportions of goods that Australia
exports
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to America, Japan,
China
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and
India
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, between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
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, Australian
exports
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to
China
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and
India
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increased during the given period,
while
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to the US and Japan, they declined. The most significant incline was for
China
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, where Australian
exports
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became the highest in 2012, from the lowest figures in the year 1990. In 1990, the Australian export of goods to Japan was the highest at just over a quarter. These figures reduced steadily to end the term at around 15% in 2012.
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, export to the United States
initially
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fluctuated at around 10%, till the year 2000, but
then
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they reduced significantly in the next decade to end the period at just slightly above 5%.
On the other hand
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,
exports
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to both
China
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and
India
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rose. Trade to both
China
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and
India
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was almost 3% in 1990,
this
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increased to almost 27% for
China
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and 5% for
India
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by 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, china, india with synonyms.
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