Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem at transportation system in your area please say describe the situation you have facing. Why do you consider it a problem? What changes would you like to recommend?
Dear sir,
My name is Nishi Prajapati from Brampton Canada. I am writing
this
letter to apprise you with
a problem with the transport system, which is causing issues to not only the students commuting but Change preposition
of
specially
the seniors as well. And I request you to look into Replace the word
especially
this
matter and do something to mitigate the problem as early as possible.
You know very well that due to
the construction work going at
the intersection near Hyde Change preposition
on at
park
and Capitalize word
Park
dundas
road .owing to it, there is always a delay of Change the capitalization
Dundas
buses
or sometimes the buses
have already departed before time . Addding
to Correct your spelling
Adding
this
, people always wait for their buses
to come on time and later they found out that buses
will get delayed. These
causes Correct pronoun usage
This
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
to
the Change preposition
for
elder
who Replace the word
elderly
faces
the issue Correct subject-verb agreement
face
for
standing for a long time Change preposition
of
at
que. on top of that, Change preposition
in
next
bus will arrive after 45 Correct article usage
the next
mins
which is quite Correct your spelling
minutes
furstating
for everyone standing at Correct your spelling
frustrating
bus
stop.
Add an article
the bus
a bus
Its
my humble request to you to look into Replace the word
It's
It is
this
matter and take it seriously. To avoid this
issue in future, you can see the timing and schedule the
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of the
buses
as per the demand of
transport on that road. Change preposition
for
Also
, temporary the
routes can be changed Correct article usage
apply
due to
construction.
Hoping for a
prompt action from you regarding Remove the article
apply
this
matter.
Yours faithfully,
Nishi PrajapatiSubmitted by prajapatinishi2001 on
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task achievement
Ensure clarity by clearly identifying the main problem in a specific sentence. This will help in understanding the core issue.
coherence cohesion
Organize the information to avoid repetition and maintain a smooth flow of ideas. Consider clearly separating the description of the problem and your recommendations.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for addressing an official.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a greeting and closing, providing a clear sense of beginning and end.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite