The charts below give information on the location and the types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
given
pie Verb problem
apply
chart
provides information about the location of dance
classes
of young people, and the horizontal bar chart
illustrates information about the types of dance
classes
of young people at present in a town in Australia.
Overall
, the majority of dance
classes
are situated in private studios, and the majority of students
are attending Ballet and Modern dance
classes
.
According to
the pie chart
, 48% of dance
classes
are situated in private studios. Meanwhile, 24% of dance
classes
are after school
Add a hyphen
after-school
classes
, and they are situated in school halls. 18% of classes
are situated in community halls and other areas. Moreover
, there are 10% of dance
classes
, which are situated in collage-based studios.
According to
the horizontal bar chart
, 600 students
, who are under 11 and only 300 students
who are 11 to 16 years old attend Ballet dance
classes
. Moreover
, around 450 students
age
under 11, and 430 Wrong verb form
aged
students
at
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
age
Replace the word
aged
of
11 to 16 attend Tap Change preposition
apply
dance
classes
. Meanwhile, only 300 students
age
under 11 attend Modern Wrong verb form
aged
dance
classes
, and around 520 students
age
Wrong verb form
aged
of
11 to 16 attend modern Change preposition
apply
classes
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