The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two tables provide information about the sales of Fairtrade-levelled
coffee
and bananas in two different years, 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Overall
, it is clear from the two tables that the sale
of coffee
and bananas increased in all European countries, however
, only in Sweden and Denmark, the
Add a missing verb
did the
sale
of banana
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bananas
decreased
.
Wrong verb form
decrease
According to
the first table, in the UK, in 1999, coffee
sale
earned 1.5 Fix the agreement mistake
sales
million
euro
. In the year 2004, the Fix the agreement mistake
euros
sale
of coffee
experienced a dramatic increase and earned 20 million
euro
. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
Moreover
, Denmark, in 1999, made profit
of 1.8 Add an article
a profit
million
euro
by selling coffee
, and in 2004, it slightly increased and only had the
Correct article usage
a
profit
of 2 million
.
According to
second
table, in Switzerland, in 1999, Change the article
the second
banana
sale
made Fix the agreement mistake
sales
profit
of 15 Add an article
a profit
million
euro
, and in the year 2004, Fix the agreement mistake
euros
banana
sale
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sales
was
dramatically increased and Unnecessary verb
apply
got
a Verb problem
made
profit
of 47 million
euro
. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
Moreover
, In belgium
, only 0.6 Change the capitalization
Belgium
million
profit
was made by selling banana
, and it slightly increased in the year 2004, which was 4 Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
million
euro
. In Sweden, the sale
of banana
declined and in 1999, the Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
profit
was 1.8 million
euro
, and in 2004, it was 1 Fix the agreement mistake
euros
million
euro
. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
Similarly
, in Denmark, in 1999, 2 million
euro
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euros
Change preposition
of banana
banana
were sold, and in 2004, 0.9 Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
euro
Fix the agreement mistake
euros bananas
banana
were sold.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sale, banana, million, euro, profit with synonyms.
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