The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in 5 European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two tables provide information about the sales of Fairtrade-levelled
coffee
and bananas in two different years, 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Overall
, it is clear from the two tables that the
sale
of
coffee
and bananas increased in all European countries,
however
, only in Sweden and Denmark,
the
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sale
of
banana
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bananas
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decreased
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.
According to
the first table, in the UK, in 1999,
coffee
sale
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sales
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earned 1.5
million
euro
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euros
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. In the year 2004, the
sale
of
coffee
experienced a dramatic increase and earned 20
million
euro
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euros
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.
Moreover
, Denmark, in 1999, made
profit
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of 1.8
million
euro
by selling
coffee
, and in 2004, it slightly increased and only had
the
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profit
of 2
million
.
According to
second
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table, in Switzerland, in 1999,
banana
sale
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sales
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made
profit
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a profit
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of 15
million
euro
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euros
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, and in the year 2004,
banana
sale
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sales
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was
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dramatically increased and
got
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a
profit
of 47
million
euro
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euros
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.
Moreover
, In
belgium
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Belgium
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, only 0.6
million
profit
was made by selling
banana
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bananas
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, and it slightly increased in the year 2004, which was 4
million
euro
. In Sweden, the
sale
of
banana
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bananas
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declined and in 1999, the
profit
was 1.8
million
euro
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euros
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, and in 2004, it was 1
million
euro
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euros
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.
Similarly
, in Denmark, in 1999, 2
million
euro
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euros
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banana
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bananas
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were sold, and in 2004, 0.9
euro
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euros bananas
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banana
were sold.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sale, banana, million, euro, profit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • substantial rise
  • stable sales
  • modest increase
  • significant increase
  • decline in sales
  • trends
  • comparisons
  • features
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