Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * describe where you lived when you were a student at the university * recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation * warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear friend

Last

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night I got your message that you got elected for a course

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ecomocics

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economics

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the same

university

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from which I graduated

last

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year and I was so happy to hear about that and without any doubt

this

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university

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will provide you with outstanding faculty and facilities for your course. In the

message

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message,

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I found out that you needed my

advise

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regarding accommodation and of

course

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course,

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it is an important issue to deal with first before you attend your classes. When I got the admission

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this

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same

university

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also

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faced the same problem . One of the biggest

mistake

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did

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made

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in rush was that I

choosed

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chose

choose

to live in the dorms

and

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it wasn'

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a wise decision for me because it turned out to be very expensive for me but don'

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worry I got you covered. I had my best friend with me who was living

along with

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me in the dorms so out of

blue

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we were convinced to rent an apartment near

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the

university

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, which

costed

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us 400 dollars cheaper. I know you don'

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find it great to live in

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apartment but I can recommend

you

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to you

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the best way to find yourself a quite comfortable and nice place to live in.There is a place right next to the main entrance of the campus and you will find

out

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apply

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alot

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of variety of places to stay at good rates. Make sure you check them all and make sure it suits your budget. I

did

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the mistake

to select

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of selecting

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dorms as I was enrolled

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the campus because I wasn'

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awared

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aware

that it would

had been costed

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cost

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alot

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a lot

thats

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that's

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why I highly recommend you

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apply

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put in some effort to find a nice

and

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apply

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place

with

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a reasonable price. Thanks Your Umar

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence and make the letter more readable.

Coherence and Cohesion

Avoid run-on sentences by using punctuation effectively, which will enhance the logical structure and readability of your writing.

Task Achievement

Provide a clear comparison of costs when discussing accommodation options to strengthen the task response.

Task Achievement

Proofread your writing for minor grammatical errors, such as agreement and spelling, to maintain clarity and professionalism.

Task Achievement

The letter maintains a warm and friendly tone throughout, suitable for advising a friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

Uses an appropriate opening and closing, fitting for a friendly letter.

Task Achievement

Successfully covers and addresses all parts of the task.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

303 words

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