The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line graph illustrates the changed trends in part of earnings for fuel consumption in two countries that are divided into three different statuses, which are poorest, middle-income, and richest.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is evident that the pattern in both countries is opposite with the highest expense on fuel from the poorest in America,
while
Linking Words
that category is the lowest in the United Kingdom. The poorest population holds the greatest percentage of income on petrol in the United States, which is up to 5%.
In contrast
Linking Words
, it tends to go down to around 5% to 4% in the average earning population.
Similarly
Linking Words
, it dramatically declines to approximately 2% in the wealthy group, which results in an enormous difference between the lowest income and the richest one. In the United Kindom, the trend is significantly different because the well-off people have the biggest expense of wages on petrol with 4%, despite the drop to below 4% later on.
However
Linking Words
, the working class has a moderate range
that is
Linking Words
from nearly 3% to 4%, which is
initially
Linking Words
the same as the richest before it falls. On the other side, even though the poorest remains the smallest, it escalates tremendously to
sligthly
Correct your spelling
slightly
under 3%.
Submitted by hanalyaa29 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fuel expenditure
  • trend analysis
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • seasonal variations
  • fluctuations
  • peak spending
  • global oil prices
  • fuel efficiency
  • economic growth
  • graph interpretation
  • comparative analysis
What to do next:
Look at other essays: