The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the total number of opening and closing stores between 2011 and 2018 in a certain country.
Overall
, both conditions of the stores represented some volatility. While
the rate of shops closed
dropped steeply in 2015, new outlet openings experienced a similar trend in 2012.
In 2011, there were many shops starting their business approximately 8,500 places compared to about 6,000 shops that closed. Replace the word
closing
However
, this
number fell just over half after a year, with only 4,000 business places being started. On the other hand
, from 2011 to 2014, the figure for business closures fluctuated slightly before significant
decline to 800 stalls in 2015Add an article
a significant
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
rebounding
substantially to 5,000 stalls in 2016.
Even though outlet openings soared again in 2013 and Wrong verb form
rebounded
reaching
six thousand places in 2014, they fell for the second time by 2,000 in the following year. In the Wrong verb form
reached
last
period, it exhibited the lowest figure at 3,000 after remaining stable for three years.Submitted by nineband9s on
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