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like
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kind
of
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novels and poems ,
it
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is
waste
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a waste

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of time mainly
high
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in high

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school
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programme
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programs

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. I
acknowledgeed
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acknowledge
acknowledged

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that honestly
literature
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more
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is more

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crusial
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crucial

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,
while
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it could be a time-squander for
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students
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. On the one hand,
at
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school's
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schools

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should
be instruct
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be instructed

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literature
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in literature

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such
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as novels and poems because it could benefit
for
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students
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students'
student's

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future life. First and foremost,
students
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who study
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or subjects
which
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related to politics ,
it
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help to improve their
broaden
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broadened

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knowledge about
nation's
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a nation's

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traditions , cultural heritage or general understanding
about
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of

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life.
In addition
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,
high
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a high

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school's
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school

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curriculum that
engaged
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engages

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literature
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not only
learn
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something about life but
also
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for enhancing
the
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relationships with people from overseas since when someone
want
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wants

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to explore
city
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the city

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or meet new people ,
literaturic
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literature
literatures

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students
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can
possible
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possibly

The adjective possible is modifying communicate instead of a noun or pronoun. Use an adverb to modify a verb, adjective, or other adverb.

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communicate or give assistance to find a way. In my view ,
however
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, learning
literature
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such
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as novels and poems
be
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a waste of time mainly highly recognized
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because many
students
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do not prefer
study
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to study

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subject
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subjects

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like literacy texts or creative writing. So they should direct to
physical
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physically

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based works for improving healthy lifestyle ,
moreover
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, if teachers instruct the
students
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who
wants
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want

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to learn about history or fulfil the physical activities could more efficient and adaptable for both of them. In conclusion,
literature
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can be of some value for
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to develop cultural familiarity.
Nevertheless
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, I am of the opinion that most high
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students
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would
neither
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not

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be interested in
literature
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so they should devote their own
ambition
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ambitions

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as well as
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interest
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interests

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should not be overlooked.

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Task Response
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that this idea is well developed with supporting examples and explanations. Some points remain unsupported or are not fully elaborated, affecting the strength of your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Focus on organizing your ideas systematically. Try to improve paragraph transitions as they occasionally disrupt the flow of ideas, which affects the logical structure of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are clearly present, establishing the purpose of the essay and rounding off the argument effectively.
Task Achievement
You have attempted to address both sides of the argument, showing an understanding of the prompt and a consideration of differing viewpoints.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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