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The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graphs display how much
time
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students
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 from 5 specific institutes give to their education during working
days
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 and off
days
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.
Overall
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,
students
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 from all the universities studied more on weekdays, compared to the weekends.
Also
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, the
time
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 given by them to study was more or less similar on working
days
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 in all the institutes, compared to the rest
days
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, where there were more variations.
To begin
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,
time
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 spent by the
students
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 on studying on
university
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days
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 was roughly around 10
hours
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 for all the places, with 10.6
hours
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 spent by the
University
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 A
students
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 being the highest and 9.5
hours
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 by the
University
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 C folks being the lowest.
On the other hand
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, the amount of
time
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 spent by these universities' folks on weekends had more difference than on weekdays, with
University
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 A
students
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 spending 9
hours
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 on the weekends on the top spot and
University
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 C
students
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 roughly spending less than half of what the study on weekdays at 5.6 in the bottom.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, students, days, university, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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