The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph shows the Linking Words
production
level of used Use synonyms
fuel
in the UK Use synonyms
since
1981 until 2000. It is clear from the graph that the most important and main Change preposition
from
fuel
Use synonyms
in
petroleum, Correct your spelling
is
while
coal and natural gas are less used in Linking Words
this
period.
Linking Words
According to
what is shown, the petroleum Linking Words
fuel
Use synonyms
increase
in 1981 from Replace the word
increased
aapproximately
90 Correct your spelling
approximately
a approximately
energy
Use synonyms
units
to 140 Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
units
, which Use synonyms
become
Wrong verb form
became
in
the peak in 1986. Change preposition
apply
While
Linking Words
,
coal Remove the comma
apply
fuel
Use synonyms
fall
suddenly from 80 Wrong verb form
fell
energy
Use synonyms
units
to around 40 Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
units
in 1986. Use synonyms
Whereas
, natural gas Linking Words
remain
stable since 1981, until 1991 natural gas Wrong verb form
remained
production
increased from 40 Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
units
it reached a high level of Use synonyms
production
in 2000.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, we could say that Linking Words
Use synonyms
production
of petroleum Correct article usage
the production
fuel
was always on the top, Use synonyms
in contrast
Linking Words
of
coal Change preposition
to
fuel
Use synonyms
that
dropped slowly all Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
period of time. Linking Words
Also
, we can see that the UK Linking Words
start
to use more Wrong verb form
has started
of
natural Change preposition
apply
fas
as Correct your spelling
gas
a
Correct article usage
apply
fuel
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, fuel, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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