You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
This
graph shows the production
level of used fuel
in the UK since
1981 until 2000. It is clear from the graph that the most important and main Change preposition
from
fuel
in
petroleum, Correct your spelling
is
while
coal and natural gas are less used in this
period.
According to
what is shown, the petroleum fuel
increase
in 1981 from Replace the word
increased
aapproximately
90 Correct your spelling
approximately
a approximately
energy
units
to 140 energy
units
, which become
Wrong verb form
became
in
the peak in 1986. Change preposition
apply
While
,
coal Remove the comma
apply
fuel
fall
suddenly from 80 Wrong verb form
fell
energy
units
to around 40 energy
units
in 1986. Whereas
, natural gas remain
stable since 1981, until 1991 natural gas Wrong verb form
remained
production
increased from 40 energy
units
it reached a high level of production
in 2000.
To sum up
, we could say that production
of petroleum Correct article usage
the production
fuel
was always on the top, in contrast
of
coal Change preposition
to
fuel
that
dropped slowly all Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
period of time. Also
, we can see that the UK start
to use more Wrong verb form
has started
of
natural Change preposition
apply
fas
as Correct your spelling
gas
a
Correct article usage
apply
fuel
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, fuel, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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