The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.

The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.
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The presented bar charts compare data about the figure of people per million that 4 various items namely, train, traffic, aircraft, and industries noise pollution in the
day
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, and
night
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in urban and suburban areas impact them in 2007.
Overall
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, it was important that the main factor that had a lot of influence at all times in
both
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regions was traffic;
additionally
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, the sound effect in the cities and
day
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was more than countryside and at
night
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.
According to
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the diagrams, traffic, the item that had the highest number among others at
both
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times and areas, hit nearly 65 in the
day
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and just under 50 at
night
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for towns and roughly 35 during the
day
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and 25 at
night
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for rural regions. the impact that trains had in
both
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districts was the same owing to the fact that at
day
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both
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of them touched almost 9 and at
night
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they reached 8. The graphs demonstrate that aircraft scored roughly 5 and 0 respectively for
day
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and
night
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.
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, the sound of industries in cities was just over 0 and in the countryside was 0.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words day, night, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • number of people
  • affected by
  • types of noise pollution
  • cities
  • rural areas
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • daytime
  • nighttime
  • summarize
  • main findings
  • conclusion
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