The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above pictorial elucidates
honey
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honey
-making process by the Use synonyms
bees
. The procedure starts with Use synonyms
bees
making Use synonyms
hives
to store the Use synonyms
nectar
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then
ends with the extraction of Linking Words
honey
formed by natural processes from the Use synonyms
hives
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Firstly
, Linking Words
Bees
work to make Use synonyms
hives
for their colonial shelter Use synonyms
as well as
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honey
storage. Once the hive is complete, they fly around in search of floral fields or fruitful trees. Use synonyms
Bees
can fly long distances in search of Use synonyms
Nectar
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Nectar
is the floral extract Use synonyms
that is
sucked by the Linking Words
bees
and accumulated in the bee Use synonyms
hives
. So Use synonyms
bees
from various directions collect Use synonyms
nectar
to store it in their hive as it Use synonyms
also
serves as their food during hibernation.
In the next step, Linking Words
bees
flap their wings creating a buzz sound to increase the temperature of the closed hive. Use synonyms
This
action helps floral Linking Words
nectar
to evaporate excess water and Use synonyms
hence
increasing heat inside gradually turns Linking Words
nectar
into Use synonyms
honey
. Use synonyms
Finally
, when the Linking Words
honey
is fully loaded, it can be manually squeezed to extract Use synonyms
honey
from the Use synonyms
hives
for consumption.Use synonyms
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