The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given maps represent the changes in the university campus
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2010 until the present. A cursory glance at the maps is enough to make it clear that there are significant improvements in the place. In general, the locations of most of the buildings were changed.
In addition
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, Some of the trees and chairs were removed.
To begin
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with, Arts and science instruction spread into different buildings. The art building remained in the old one and the university office was removed and replaced by the science college. There is a new
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's accommodation in the east of the area and added new road next to the
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's accommodation.
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facilities,shops and offices gather in one building in the south of the University.
On the other hand
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, the location of the lake remained unchanged.It is in the centre of the place and surrounded by some trees. There is extra
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accommodation beside to old one in the northwest of the map.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words student with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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