Task 1. The pie charts compare the highest level of education achieved by women in Someland across two years, 1945 and 1995. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.
The diagrams indicate the female’s achievement in
levels
of Use synonyms
education
in Someland between 1945 and 1995. Use synonyms
Overall
, most of the numbers and information changed significantly in two Linking Words
years
. The first pie chart describes six Use synonyms
levels
of Use synonyms
education
and each level Use synonyms
divides
unequally. Wrong verb form
is divided
Secondly
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
education
Use synonyms
levels
decreased from six to four, three Use synonyms
levels
had no exit in 1995.
As can be seen, Use synonyms
women
's Use synonyms
education
level in Someland in 1945 was terrible, there was no post-graduate and only 1% of people had their first university degree. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
women
who graduate high school is only 4% and 10%, 15% with who study until 9th and 6th grade, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, no schooling and third grade were common in 1945 with 35% for each level.
Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
education
for Use synonyms
women
in 1995 was more developed than in 1945. The situations of no schooling, and studying until 3rd and 6th grades had completely disappeared. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of females who have first university degrees dramatically rose from 1% to 50% in 50 Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, post-graduate increased sharply to 20%, and the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
who studied until 12th grade Use synonyms
also
grew to 20%. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, girls who studied for 9 Linking Words
years
remained stable Use synonyms
during
50 Change preposition
for
years
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words levels, education, years, number, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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