Some people say that all experimentations on animals is bad amd should be outlawed. However, others argue that experimenting animals can lead to important scientific discoveries. Is it justified to experiment on animals? Are there any alternatives?

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It is claimed that

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animals

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is cruel and should be illegal,

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some believe that scientific breakthroughs are

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of experimenting

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animals

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on animals

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. I would argue that experimentation on

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is not justifiable

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there

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no alternative objects to test on. The reason why experimenting

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animals

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with animals

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is unfair is that these creatures, like humans, can sense pain and have feelings.

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some

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that

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of certain

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, which can cause

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to the objects, is requisite. In

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case, the

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would suffer from the

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caused by the liquid both emotionally and physically.

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, testing on

animals

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can impact

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their mental conditions and cause them to suffer in

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. From

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point of view, using

animals

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for

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is as same as testing on people.

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, there have not been any potential alternatives for

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. If humans are tested for medical

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, there can be unpredictable

side-effects

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such

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as blacking out and memory loss, which can eventually lead to life-threatening problems.

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, it has been a ritual that

experiment

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can only be performed on humans after it has

tested

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animals

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this

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reason, there is only a small number of people who willingly register to volunteer;

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, it is insufficient to perform

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on them. In conclusion, there have been different views on animal

experimentations

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some would say that performing experiments on

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results in groundbreaking scientific findings, others would claim that it is cruel and unacceptable to test on

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and

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that governments

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should outlaw these

experimentations

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. In my opinion,

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despite

lacking alternatives to do

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on, experimenting

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animals

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on animals

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is inhumane and intolerable.

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Consider developing ideas with more specific examples or studies on animal testing to strengthen your points and provide clearer evidence.

coherence cohesion

Work on ensuring smoother transitions between your paragraphs to enhance the flow of your ideas.

introduction conclusion present

The essay provides a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing the main arguments and providing a balanced view of the issue.

complete response

The writer discusses both sides of the argument, which shows a strong understanding of the topic's complexity and satisfies the task requirements.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

274 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Animal rights
Ethical considerations
Scientific advancement
In-vitro testing
Computer modeling
Human cell cultures
Sentient beings
Regulatory bodies
Safety testing
Medical breakthroughs
The Three Rs (Reduction, Replacement, Refinement)
Alternatives to animal testing
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Some people say that all experimentations on animals is bad amd should be outlawed. However, others argue that experimenting animals can lead to important scientific discoveries. Is it justified to experiment on animals? Are there any alternatives?

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