The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts
depicts
the variation in the proportion of companies in Change the verb form
depict
three
continents selling drugs between 2002 and 2006. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can seen that the total drug sales in America showed a descending trend, Linking Words
while
those in Asia recorded the opposite. Linking Words
Additionally
, the percentage of drug selling in Europe was slightly fluctuation.
Looking in more detail, in 2002, the proportion of drug company's total sales in America stood at 41%, representing a significant portion. Linking Words
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remained
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continued
three
years before increasing by one per cent in the final period at 30%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the rate of selling in Asia rose consistently over the half-decade, from 25% in 2002 to 40% in 2006, becoming the largest contributor among the Linking Words
three
regions.
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On the other hand
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although
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this
business in Europe rose marginally during the first Linking Words
three
years, reaching the largest figure of 38% in 2004 compared to other countries, Use synonyms
this
figure experienced a decline, dropping by 8% to reach 30% in 2006.Linking Words
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