The diagrams below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site.

The given pictures illustrate how the industrial
site
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will be redeveloped in the future.
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, the
site
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is expected to undergo a number of prominent changes, the most important of which are the development of accommodation, greenery and the
contruction
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construction
of transportation amenities at the expense of workplaces. Currently, though, there are four roads named Chimney Road, Pie Walk, Swallow Street and Toe Lane circulating around the industrial complex; employees can only access the workplace via the entrance and reception through Chimney Road in the north. After getting inside, workers can park their vehicles in the parking zone situated next to storage and Toe Lane in the west. In the south, there is a series of offices, which is accompanied by a canteen catering for nutritional needs. Next to the canteen in the east is a factory,
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in the centre of the complex is a vacant yard.
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the redevelopment plan, four roads surrounding the
site
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will remain unchanged. Meanwhile, the parking space and the storage house will be converted into 3-bedroom and 4-bedroom houses. The north section of the complex will
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witness a number of changes with the entrance and reception being turned into three 2-bedroom houses, and the yard being transformed into communal gardens. In the future, workers will approach their workplace via three new private roads circulating the accommodation complex in the north.
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, the canteen and the office
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will be replaced by parking garages, the factory will
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be converted into an apartment, which is accompanied by a parking area.

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