You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table shows data about the
number
of New Zealand citizens by age
from 2011 to 2012.
Overall
, the number
of population
from all age
groups increased from 2011 to 2012, with a minimum decrease in the number
of people from birth until the age
of 39 years
during the given period.
To begin
with, there is a slight increase in the percentage
of residents from all age
groups over 1 1-year period from 2011 to 2012 which is 0.6% only. However
, people over 65 years
old show the highest increase in percentage
(4%) in comparison to other age
groups in the same year.
On the other hand
, the percentage
of people from 15 years
to 39 years
old declined by about 0.2% from 2011 to 2012. Similarly
, the percentage
of pediatric
Correct article usage
the pediatric
population
under 15 years
old declined with the same percentage
of the population
from 15-39 years
in the same given period.
In conclusion, The percentage
of change in population
number
has increased slightly from 2011 to 2012, due to
the increase in the number
of citizens from the age
of 40 years
and more.Submitted by ghufran.mahmoud on
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