You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. 

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table shows data about the
number
of New Zealand citizens by
age
from 2011 to 2012.
Overall
, the
number
of
population
from all
age
groups increased from 2011 to 2012, with a minimum decrease in the
number
of people from birth until the
age
of 39
years
during the given period.
To begin
with, there is a slight increase in the
percentage
of residents from all
age
groups over 1 1-year period from 2011 to 2012 which is 0.6% only.
However
, people over 65
years
old show the highest increase in
percentage
(4%) in comparison to other
age
groups in the same year.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of people from 15
years
to 39
years
old declined by about 0.2% from 2011 to 2012.
Similarly
, the
percentage
of
pediatric
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population
under 15
years
old declined with the same
percentage
of the
population
from 15-39
years
in the same given period. In conclusion, The
percentage
of change in
population
number
has increased slightly from 2011 to 2012,
due to
the increase in the
number
of citizens from the
age
of 40
years
and more.
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