You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar and line graphs provide information about average temperatures and beachwear
sales
in New York for 6 months of 2012.
Overall
, it is evident that the amount of revenue experienced a significant increase, despite a sharp dip by the end of the period.
Furthermore
, the average
warmth
per month saw a modest growth over the period given. Looking in more detail, bathing suit
sales
began with around $100k, and the
warmth
in January was around 30F.
Moreover
, the average temperature for February remained stable,
while
the amount of money from beachwear purchases observed a modest growth of $130k.
In addition
, the
sales
rose to about $150k in March, and
also
the monthly
warmth
increased slightly. Regarding the remaining figures, the total revenue peaked at almost $290k in April. When it comes to temperature,
this
stat saw a modest rise to 65F by the end of the period. Despite a growth of
warmth
, bathing suit
sales
dropped sharply to around $70k, followed by a gradual fall to $10k through June.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, warmth, k with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "modest" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • line chart
  • average monthly temperatures
  • bathing suit sales
  • correlation
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • rise/fall
  • consumer behavior
  • anomalies
  • inconsistencies
  • seasonal goods
  • economic factors
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