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The charts belove give information about the use of the Internet in five countries in Europe in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts belove give information about the use of the Internet in five countries in Europe in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate data on
internet
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 usage in five countries (
Spain
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, France,
Sweden
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,
Germany
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, and the
UK
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) in 2000. Units are measured in percentages,
while
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 the pie chart shows the percentage of people spending money on online shopping in each country. Spending amounts are measured in
euros
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.
Overall
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,
Sweden
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 had the highest percentage of
internet
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 users in 2000,
whereas
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Spain
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 had the lowest. It is clearly seen that an individual in the
UK
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 spent double the amount on online shopping compared to a
person
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 in
Germany
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. In terms of the population using the
Internet
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 in Europe,
Sweden
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 was at the top with 35%.
Internet
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 usage in the
UK
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 was
also
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 relatively high at 20%, compared to
Germany
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, which reached 15%.
On the other hand
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,
Spain
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 and France were almost the same, with 10% and 15% respectively. With regards to the average spending on online shopping, individuals in the
UK
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 and
Sweden
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 spent the highest amounts at 87
euros
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 and 76
euros
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 per
person
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 respectively.
Similarly
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,
Germany
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 stood at about 46
euros
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 per
person
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,
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but France
 was slightly higher at around 57
euros
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 per
person
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.
Conversely
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, when it comes to
Spain
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, individuals spent the least in Europe, at just 10
euros
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, spain, sweden, germany, uk, euros, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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